Friday 30 June 2017

bees speech reflection


we should be doing more to look after  our bees 

 I should work on eye contact at the  
I like my speech because i have detailed into my conclusion             I should speak more louder to the people I was neres when i was talking i feeling like a worm .



2 comments:

  1. GOOD LUCK FOR NEXT TIME YOU SAY YOUR SPEECH TYLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. check spelling before you publish but you did well writing bad and good things about your speech.

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